MESSAGE TO THE MANAGEMENT
Hi,
I am writing in response to quality concerns (content being very close to the original one) raised about Christopher’s resume order.
As you noted, I rewrote the resume as required by company policies, but the final draft still seemed too close to the client’s original resume. The reason for this, on my part, is that the client’s previous positions were technical; meaning most of his work involved performing duties assigned to him. This hindered him from having achievements, which would have provided room for my creativity in portraying his accomplishments. Also, too much rewriting on the resume would have changed the meaning of his responsibilities.
NOTE: I agree this should not be an excuse and I promise to improve on this area.
Best regards,