why transgender people should be allowed to choose a restroom of their choice
Essay review
The student essay I analyzed is on the reason why transgender people should be allowed to choose a restroom of their choice. The argument is highly convincing because the author offers several reasons, besides immersing the reader into the dangers and pitfalls of both sides of the dilemma. In the end, the conclusion that the author makes from each specific supporting detail provides a premise for accepting the critical argument. The supporting information is also true and reasonable to the extent that the author resorts to the use of facts values that are grounded in the empirical literature. From time to time, the student has also shown an impeccable ability to allude to official policy on the topic. Facts are also presented from the beginning of the essay as well as seen in the way the student alludes to empirical findings and views of the precedent courts. I also find that the student used sufficient evidence to support their claim, which demonstrates the author has a sound understanding of the topic. The use of statistical and empirical evidence in the body of the paper shows that the student has a mastery of the topic and had done an exhaustive review of relevant literature.
One of the rhetorical devices that the student employs effectively in the paper includes pathos. Pathos is the attempt by the author to provoke emotions on the audience. “Allowing transgender to choose their restroom increases the risk of predators.” The quote evokes an emotional feeling on the challenges faced when one considers how to approach the issue of transgender equality.