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Keyword: Vegan tote bag
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I feel lost from the 1st paragraph because nothing reflects the title or at least the keyword “vegan tote bag.”
You have talked about veganism, food, restaurant etc, all of which are out of context for this specific article.
If we cannot capture our prospects in the first paragraph we’ve lost them.
And if the content can’t reflect the title, it can only increase our bounce rate and google is taking note of that.
The first place I can locate the primary key phrase “vegan tote bag” is in the 4th paragraph which is not right.
We agreed focus keywords should also be included within the first 100 characters, which you didn’t do in both the article and the blog.
The first paragraph should give a glimpse of what the article is all about and the rest should elaborate on the same but this is not the case here.
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Again your introduction reflects nothing about the primary phrase “vegan clothing” which might come out as misleading for most people.
Again the 1st place I can locate the primary keyphrase is on third subsection which is wrong.
A phrase like “vegan tote bags for work” doesn’t flow naturally in the text. It feels forced.
Too much lack of spacing between words.
We agreed not to include “conclusion” as a subsection but you guys did the same thing.
You also didn’t put the agreed word count into consideration. The blog post has 602 which is less the 700 we agreed on.
Also we expected you to correct the word count from last week’s blog and articles before publishing but you didn’t.
It’s obvious you didn’t consider our last suggestions and that’s just unacceptable. This is a business and should be handled as such.
It’s okay to get our opinion on the content you’re writing but we at least need to see your professionalism in as much as keyword placement, distribution, and content quality in concerned.
We want white hat SEO for our website and to achieve that, quality content is key but we feel you’re not helping us attain that.
I don’t think we can continue doing this if you guys are not up to the task.
We can’t afford performing the same mistakes. This is a business and should be handled as such.