Response on American education
Response to Kurt
I wish to agree with you that inequalities in the American education system derail the achievement of equality across gender, race and class. While you emphasize inequalities among the minority groups, you also confirm that academic inequalities dominate among majority schools. While I acknowledge that the government has done much to address equality in education, I suggest that you incorporate more facts from outside sources to strengthen your counterargument. Further, your conclusion is on point as it reemphasizes the concept of academic inequalities in America. Incase you may wish to improve it; I suggest you restate the thesis statement and suggest more realistic solutions that can effectively addressing inequalities in American education.
Response to Hudgeson
I acknowledge your viewpoint concerning the controversies surrounding being lack in America. You are right that being black in America should not be an issue if some problems were fixed. Your evidence strong support the thesis statement. For examples, issues such as police brutality, and unfair legal rulings make the blacks feel inferior to their white counterparts. The introductory paragraph is great as it introduces the reader to the challenges that Audre and her family face on the account of their color. You may consider other forms of discrimination in public facilities like restaurants, sports centers, schools and hospitals.