Peer response.
Introduction.
The movie by alan enlightens the struggles then he went through since he was a boy. His life struggles can be symbolic to a caged jaguar. At a very young age, he was unable to express himself and the majority of the time he was misjudged eloquently. Being able to understand what the animals go through, he devoted his life to giving a voice to the voiceless(Gordon, R. (2016). This is evident when, in later years, he left all the comfy life behind and departed to live in the bush to give a voice to those who were voiceless, the animals.
Points noteworthy.
The pivotal decision by Alan leave everything behind to go and fight for the animals is a vital judgment that depicts selflessness and care. This should not only be a lesson to fight for the animals, but also for the people who are oppressed amongst us in our community (Bouma, A. (2017)). There is a need to be selfless in fighting for what we believe in, no matter how much we go through.
What would you like to share with your peers?
Through my life, I have been through various experiences that have to lead to the dynamic changes in my life. in my story; I will aim at vividly describing these experiences. This experiences I believe different lessons can be drawn from them (Bouma, A. (2017). Having being brought up in a middle-class family, life was not always bread and butter. Life was punctuated with struggles both at home and also at school. My parents, at times, would not afford to pay for meals or buy me descent clothes. This made life at school a hell of experience (Potter, D. (2016).
What kind of feedback are helpful for my story.
The feedback that is purposed at on the crucial parts in my story that needs edit my natrrative and if it has a logical flow. The feedback will be essential since it will enable fundamental editing that will give my narrative to have a logical flow and interesting. Also, the feedback that encourages and motivates will encourage me to work on my writing skills.
Conclusion.
In writing a personal narrative, it is important to ensure that the story has a logical flow, factual, and also very interesting. Feedbacks enables people to make outstanding editing in the narrative and also motivates writers in writing an interesting piece(Potter, D. (2016).
References.
Gordon, R. (2016). Moving targets: hunting in contemporary Africa.
Nash, R. (2019). Liberating scholarly writing: The power of personal narrative. IAP.
Norrie, C., Waller, A., & Potter, D. (2016, August). Supporting Personal Narrative Elicitation: Identifying Discrete Moment of Interest Event Cues Within Digital Video Footage. In 17th Biennial International Society for Augmentative and Augmentative Communication Conference: Bringing us Together.
Bouma, A. (2017). Elements of a Narrative. Teaching With Music, 60.